1.05

Almost a week passed, and Jeorr bare­ly heard or saw any sign of his ward. Not that he had much of a chance, holed up in his work­shop. The only rea­son he knew Car­nelia wasn’t lying injured in the totem gar­den was because he’d hear her tired foot­steps echo­ing through­out the house as she stum­bled back to bed every night. The rest of the day, he’d spend both hop­ing for and fear­ing her ear­ly return, because it would either mean that she had giv­en up, which was high­ly unlike­ly, or that she had suc­ceed­ed, which he self­ish­ly hoped wouldn’t hap­pen.

To the detri­ment of his hair­line, nei­ther out­come occurred. For six straight morn­ings, Car­nelia head­ed out at the break of mist every day to face her rite of pas­sage, and for six straight nights, she returned home at the chill of night­fall. And dur­ing that whole time, Jeorr suc­cess­ful­ly kept him­self busy by man­gling dozens of his sculp­tures. Real­ly just mash­ing them to bits.

But on the sev­enth and last day, some­thing final­ly lured Jeorr out of his cave.

It start­ed as a dull buzz, a low tick­le in his ear--a sen­sa­tion so imper­cep­ti­ble that it was hard­ly worth notic­ing. In any oth­er place in the world, in any oth­er time of his life, Jeorr would’ve chalked it up to the noise of some pass­ing fly and gone on with his day. But this was Down­town. There were very few bugs to be found around these parts.

The noise, ever sub­tle, slipped between his strikes, poked and prod­ded him as he looked over designs. It ate away at him, itch­ing inside his ear until it was all he could hear. But when he looked for it, it van­ished. It ducked beneath the door, squeezed behind the win­dow shut­ters, and hid inside the vents. It seemed to be com­ing from every­where and nowhere at once.

Even­tu­al­ly, Jeorr couldn’t take it any­more. He dropped his tools and stepped out­side for some ‘fresh air’, only, when he did, he was greet­ed by that same noise, but at a greater vol­ume. That’s when he rec­og­nized it.

It was the buzz of peo­ple.

Every busy city and bustling mar­ket across the world had this noise; when over­lap­ping laugh­ter, frag­ments of con­ver­sa­tion, and sounds of peo­ple mov­ing and shift­ing about, all mixed and blend­ed until they became one fuzzy, live­ly fre­quen­cy. It shocked Jeorr to hear it here in Down­town, in this town of end­less echoes, where peo­ple learned to walk with­out a sound to avoid the ire of their neigh­bors.

His curios­i­ty was piqued. Jeorr stepped out into the carved stone streets of Down­town to find what was what.

The town was emp­ti­er than usu­al. Cer­tain­ly, Down­town was nev­er a spec­tac­u­lar hub of com­merce, but what few store­fronts there were were shut­tered, and most of the homes he passed were dark and emp­ty. There wasn’t even the usu­al group of judg­men­tal old folk gath­ered on a street cor­ner, whis­per­ing gos­sip and shoot­ing side­long glances at passers­by. With­out its inhab­i­tants, the under­ground town was about as home­ly as an aban­doned grave­yard.

What­ev­er was going on, the noise was his only trail. So he fol­lowed it by slight­ly-deaf ear, the noise grow­ing loud­er with each step he took toward the cen­ter of town. It grew and grew until he round­ed one last cor­ner and was washed over with a wave of sound.

In front of him, the street was crammed with a crowd of excit­ed geri­atrics. And past their bald­ing, grey­ing heads, in the dis­tance…

…Car­nelia was hold­ing onto the Blaze­bright totem for dear life.

Jeorr shook his head wry­ly. Of course, she was behind this com­mo­tion. She always was.


Appar­ent­ly, the whole town had shown up to watch Carnelia’s climb. They were mak­ing a day of it, too. They sat on pic­nic blan­kets and fold-up chairs, nib­bling on expen­sive import­ed cheeses and drink­ing home­made wines whilst they shout­ed, cheered, and jeered at Car­nelia. Most­ly cheer­ing, but some couldn’t resist the age-old plea­sure of shout­ing unasked-for advice to youths.

“Use your fin­gers! Your fin­gers!”

As if she was­n’t already. Jeorr was mak­ing his way through to the front of the crowd when a par­tic­u­lar­ly bel­liger­ent drunk made his pres­ence known to every­one with­in earshot. The woman waved her arms, thick as hams, and hollered for Carnelia’s atten­tion.

“Hey, girlie! Your old man is here! Try not to let those dain­ty hands slip, eh?”

Jeorr stopped in the mid­dle of the street as every­one turned to look at him. Car­nelia froze too, meet­ing his eyes from a street-length away.

Unfor­tu­nate­ly, cling­ing part-way up a slip­pery pil­lar with a stone near­ly a third of her weight strapped to her back was no time for Car­nelia to get dis­tract­ed. Jeorr’s heart skipped a beat as his ward slipped, falling out of view behind a crowd of old peo­ple. He heard a dull thump a moment lat­er.

Fear­ing the worst, Jeorr shoved his way through the crowd. By the time he broke through to the front, though, Car­nelia was already back on her feet. Every­one cheered as she dust­ed her­self off and flexed to show she was all right.

As Jeorr let out a breath, a voice chid­ed him from his side.

“It’s a lit­tle late to be wor­ry­ing about her, Jeorr. That’s what, only the tenth time she’s fall­en today?”

Jeorr turned to find Miss Eleina stand­ing there with her arms on her hips and an eye­brow arched quite judg­men­tal­ly high. At her side, lit­tle Opal stared after Car­nelia with wide-eyed wor­ry, hands clutched over his heart.

“What are you doing here?” Jeorr replied, imme­di­ate­ly defen­sive. He nod­ded at the fear­ful boy. “Isn’t it still school hours?”

“Field trip,” Miss Eleina eas­i­ly coun­tered. “What about you? Got a lit­tle lone­ly in your work­shop?”

Jeorr flushed at her mock­ing tone. But instead of respond­ing, he turned his atten­tion back to his pri­or­i­ty, Car­nelia. Their eyes met again, this time with both par­ty’s feet on the ground.

She took a step for­ward with a hand ready to wave hel­lo.

He crossed his arms and shook his head.

She stopped, set her jaw, then nod­ded.

Yes. This was how it should be. No words were need­ed between them. She knew, and he knew, that this was her chal­lenge; for her to defeat alone. Even if he want­ed to help, this was not the time or place. After all, if she couldn’t han­dle this, there was no way she was ready for the Challen--

“Not a sin­gle word of encour­age­ment, you horse’s ass?”

Miss Eleina’s whis­per inter­rupt­ed his very impor­tant ratio­nal­iza­tions. He shot back.

“Shut up, Eleina. This is seri­ous.”

“Oh yes, so very seri­ous. Bet­ter watch out, or some­one might mis­take you for those stat­ues you so love to make.”

Jeorr frowned, shak­ing his head. He knew Lily was just teas­ing him, but she did­n’t get it. This wasn’t about being nice, or kind. This was about--

Well. It didn’t mat­ter if his friend under­stood. It only mat­tered that Car­nelia did. And from the sud­den inten­si­ty with which his ward returned to her chal­lenge…

…he was sure she real­ized the stakes.